Post by elizabeth keighle on Dec 13, 2009 22:08:48 GMT
HERE IT STARTS - THE PARK
(Keith, Jay, Elizabeth and Sabrina?)
(Keith, Jay, Elizabeth and Sabrina?)
- Keith is in the park alone at night
- Jay comes in - drunk. o.o
- Keith tries to get away from Jay by sliding across the bench. He wonders what it's like to kiss Jay
- Jay is following Keith o.o
- Keith kisses Jay
- Jay kisses Keith back
- Elizabeth and Sabrina come back from their party and take a shortcut through the park. They stop when they hear noises up ahead, and get onto the grass to the their shoes don't make clicking noises.
- Elizabeth sees the people kissing and relaxes a bit, but suddenly realizes it's Keith and Jay, making her angry. She films the whole thing on her phone from behind a tree.
- She comes out of the shadows with Sabrina and says, "Well, what's this?" [in a shmexii voice xD]
- The guys stop.
- Elizabeth walks to the other side of the bench and slaps Jay around the face so hard her hand turns red. Her eyes also go red [murder mode xD]
- Jay somehow reacts...
- They kinda fight o.o
- Keith leaves
- Elizabeth leaves - upset - with Sabrina
- And does Jay leave last?
TWO DAYS LATER - AT THE FOUNTAIN
(Jay and Elizabeth)
(Jay and Elizabeth)
- Elizabeth is just walking, still angry with Jay.
- Jay finds her on the way, and stops her so they can talk.
- Elizabeth ignores him and keeps walking
- Jay makes her stop - eventually.
- Elizabeth says "What do you want, Jay?" [angry]
- Jay asks her to the Christmas Dance
- Elizabeth refuses to go with him.
- Jay: "Please?"
- Elizabeth rolls her eyes and says yes
- Anything else?
AT THE CHRISTMAS DANCE - THE NIGHTCLUB
(Jay, Elizabeth, anyone else?)
(Jay, Elizabeth, anyone else?)
- Jay arrives first wearing: ?
- Elizabeth comes shortly after looking great, wearing: A long blue dress.
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[/li][li]They get some drinks - Jay goes for an alcoholic drink.
[/li][li]Elizabeth slaps Jay and tells him she's leaving.
[/li][li]He makes her stay [and gets something different to drink] xD[/s]
[/li][li]They do something?
[/li][li]Jay asks Elizabeth to the New Year's Party
[/li][li]She says OK
[/li][li]They start becoming friends again
[/li][li]Anything else?
[/li][li]They leave the party and walk home.[/li][/ul]
NEW YEARS PARTY - THE THEME PARK
(Elizabeth, Jay)
[please note: I added things in here]
(Elizabeth, Jay)
[please note: I added things in here]
They arrive together at the theme park, looking excited.- They go on scary ride :] The ghost train
- Elizabeth hates it. =/ She sits with her hands on her eyes, she hates fake sickly things, but isn't so bothered when it's real...
- They see an ice rink, and *try* to skate.
- Do they see anyone they know?
- Five mins before 12am, they go on the Ferris Wheel, to calm things down a bit.
- On the countdown, Elizabeth turns to Jay and says "I have something for you, I know you've always wanted it."
- 3... 2... 1... BANG
- Fireworks go off and she snogs Jay ^^
- She says: "I love you, I'm sorry for being so mean to you."
- He says: "Mhm, kiss me." xD
- So they kiss
- When they reach the bottom, the guy who owns the ride kicks them off for acting like they were. He gives Jay a dirty look.
- Elizabeth lies: "We're both juniors, I'm just short."
- They run away, laughing
- They walk home together through the park, kissing on the way.
- Anything else?
BACK HOME - ELIZABETH'S DORM
(Elizabeth, Jay)
(Elizabeth, Jay)
- They arrive at the door
- Elizabeth says she's not tired when she really is, and she invites him inside, he hesitates, but follows.
- They sit on the sofa and talk.
- Elizabeth says she doesn't want Jay to leave, but she wants to sleep.
- She goes to bed, and Jay sleeps in the spare one.
- Elizabeth has a nightmare: She's at the beach, with Jay, but then he leaves her, and she can't follow him. She looks to her right, and is attacked my a mysterious someone...
- She wakes up - screaming and crying
- Jay goes to comfort her, cuddles her.
- Elizabeth tells him about her dream
- He says "I'll never leave you." But he doesn't know Elizabeth's nightmares usually come true.
- She lays down, terrified because she knows this will happen, but she says nothing.
- Jay waits for her to sleep, and he watches her
- He falls asleep next to her
- Jay wakes up first
- Elizabeth wakes up later on
- He goes to kiss her but she refuses and makes him clean himself up first
- When he returns, she is waiting for him and she kisses him
- She goes to curl her hair
- Jay says: "Why are you taking so long?"
- She says: "It takes time to look this good."
- Jay: "You look good already."
- He has a surprise for her.
- He takes her to the stables and gives her a horseriding lesson. [are we gonna act this out or not?]
- Later that evening, Jay takes her to see a horror film, and she hides all the way though it. Jay keeps saying, "It's OK, don't be scared." [are we gonna act this out or not?]
THAT NIGHT - AT THE BEACH
(Jay, Elizabeth, Keith)
[remember her nightmare everyone]
(Jay, Elizabeth, Keith)
[remember her nightmare everyone]
- Lizzy and Jay are walking together on the beach, holding hands, talking and kissing
- They see Keith ahead, and Jay lets go of Elizabeth's hand. He walks away from her - right away - he leaves the beach. And she's on her own, apart from Keith. Elizabeth is terrified, and dared not run after Jay
- Keith glares at Elizabeth. He has a knife in his mouth, he licks the knife [looking sexy] and cuts his tongue, he has blood running down his chin from the corners of his mouth.
- Elizabeth looks to her right and sees Keith, noticing he's glaring, and bleeding, she says: "What?"
- Keith: "You could do better." [talking in low, sexy voice]
- Elizabeth: "Oh, really? Like who?" [talking in quiet, sexy voice]
- Keith: "Someone your own age, someone sexy, anyone but Jay" (i think he says something like that, remember you can edit)
- Elizabeth: "You're just jealous, and what's with the knife, what are you gonna do, kill me?"
- Keith pushes Elizabeth against the rocks [and holds the knife to her throat? Is that right?]
- Elizabeth gasps and closes her eyes - now terrified
- Keith: "If I don't see you kissing someone else soon, I will make you suffer the pain and torture I'm going to but you though - then I will murder you."
- Elizabeth: "Fine." // And then she kisses Keith
- Keith smirks throughout the kiss, but still kisses her back
- Elizabeth: "Murder me, and I'll haunt your thoughts for the rest of your days."
- Keith: "Have fun with that." // He begins to walk away
- Elizabeth breathes deep for a few seconds and then runs silently after him - she jumps him and they both fall to the floor
- They both fight like wolves (xD), Elizabeth gets to him first and grabs his throat, but he kicks her away and pins her down. Elizabeth can't move because of his size and weight. Now she's truly terrified. xD
- Keith looks at her for a few seconds and then kisses her
- She kisses him back
- It lasts for a while
- Keith then gets up and runs away.
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OK then, guys! ^^ This is all I got so far, feel free to edit my post in any way you like. You may continue this on, because I don't know what happens next, give some ideas! Y'know, just do whatever xD
Also,striked bullet points are the finished parts :]
OK then, guys! ^^ This is all I got so far, feel free to edit my post in any way you like. You may continue this on, because I don't know what happens next, give some ideas! Y'know, just do whatever xD
Also,